I know I’m picky, but there’s a grammar issue in panel 3. It should be: “Benjamin, you are a good man. Even in a demonic rage, you sought to protect me.” Or even a semi colon would work, I think.
ANYWAYS Demon puppy is cute <3 Can I name him?
If you weren’t so busy I’d ask you to be an editor! There’s bound to be grammar errors when artists are involved. Words are strange creatures to me.
Sorry you can’t name him. He’s already got a name that will be reveled in a page or two. 🙂
I like editing! Just send stuff to me anyways :3
I love the doc. Have I said this before? I think I have….
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I know I’m picky, but there’s a grammar issue in panel 3. It should be:
“Benjamin, you are a good man. Even in a demonic rage, you sought to protect me.”
Or even a semi colon would work, I think.
ANYWAYS
Demon puppy is cute <3
Can I name him?
If you weren’t so busy I’d ask you to be an editor! There’s bound to be grammar errors when artists are involved. Words are strange creatures to me.
Sorry you can’t name him. He’s already got a name that will be reveled in a page or two. 🙂
I like editing! Just send stuff to me anyways :3
I love the doc. Have I said this before? I think I have….